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Boa Hancock One Piece from Katsucon 2013 by lawrencebrenner Boa Hancock One Piece from Katsucon 2013 by lawrencebrenner
Boa Hancock One Piece from Katsucon 2013 with *Flaming-Goddess
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Since your work on this picture is mainly photography, I'll judge you based on your ability as a photographer.

You had a great eye for the moment and place where you shot the photo (or you were very lucky to get it by coincidence). You got the cosplayer's cold look (quite reminiscent of Hancock), next to a seemingly lush garden (making sense with her setting), yet keeping the focus in the person being photographed. You gave relevance and variety to what one may see in the picture.

I'm not sure on how to judge your originality, but I can tell you that getting that picture next to a seemingly lush garden is more interesting than watching sole pictures of characters being cosplayed on settings with little life to them and just posing, but not trying to portray their character.

The way the camera is focused so the cosplayer is the focal point, yet without blurring agressively the nearer objects, turns the picture into a soothing work to appreciate, without putting much strain on one's eyes.

Well, you captured the most impactful features of the cosplayer - and so its character- in a protrait using the present lighting at your advantage, creating a work deserving of attention.

If this seems too generous, it's because I don't really find much to critic on your work with this picture, as I don't like to raise false arguments or invent excuses to gather attention or lower the star count.

Praise yourself, it's not a bad photo.
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:iconjester3000:
Jester3000 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2017
Yep there's a keeper.
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nexybah Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2016
perfect
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:iconlawrencebrenner:
lawrencebrenner Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2016  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Thank you 😊
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nexybah Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2016
^^
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ludovicG76 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2015
Magnifique !! ;)
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:iconleloup144:
leloup144 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014
Thank you verry much<3<3<3
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thetrain3000 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Are you selling non-watermarked versions?
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:iconlawrencebrenner:
lawrencebrenner Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Sorry I did not get your message I'm not logged in to dA all the time. I was considering a print store.
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omar81 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013
well u have succeeded in turnin me to stone ........................again
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kuldian Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
Very sexy, your boobs are huge, love it :)
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:iconfellitorockero:
FellitoRockero Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013
I'm not sure if I'll be able to write another critique. I already wrote two on her works, which I still find awesome, despite of their flaws.
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dryan1982 Featured By Owner May 19, 2013
Holy...do you all see what I see? Look at the size of THOSE EARRINGS! Incredible, aren't they?
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Dzikus611 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013
ale ma te cyce,,..
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Daftotron Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay, now for some more constructive criticism:
I's say the only problem with it is the water mark. Sure, I know you want to avoid someone stealing it and claiming it to be their own work, but maybe put it somewhere a liiiiitle less in-the-way, like on her left shoulder? I don't know, just a suggestion. Please correct me if I'm wrong. :P
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lawrencebrenner Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
My own watermark is in the upper left hand corner the other is the deviantart watermark.
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Typhlosion-Kaito Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013
T bem Boa memo!
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:icondaftotron:
Daftotron Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
phancy
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snikeye Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'ma melt! :iconimdeadplz:
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:iconlawrencebrenner:
lawrencebrenner Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
That's funny thank you.
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snikeye Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
My pleasure! :iconilikeitplz:
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GodzillaD1 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
Eh?! You were there?!
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:iconlawrencebrenner:
lawrencebrenner Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Yes, yes I was.
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Alex-GTS-Artist Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I know she has a deviantart profile, you could link her here
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:iconlawrencebrenner:
lawrencebrenner Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Updated with the link I did not have before.
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